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[dalwriter.livejournal.com]

Hi all.

I hope it's OK to post this here. If you can help me, please reply.

The only muse I can currently hear clearly is for Blue Bloods. I am a Jamie/Edie shipper. As every JAMKO fan knows we have all been squee-ing loudly since last week's kiss. I have written most of a coda FF for Personal Business but would love for somebody to review it. Those two kids did not go willingly into the bedroom. I want to make sure it's not too contrived so I'd really prefer help from somebody who watches the show. But at this point, anybody who can spell & has a clue about what descent dialogue sounds like would be a blessing.

In a effort to relocate my H50 muse I signed up for Swap of Joy. Haldoor then informed me I am required to have a beta. Anybody wanna help out a McDanno lover?

Thanks in advance for any assist.