Looking for a pair of eyes...

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To look over my Spring Fling fic for me. Just need someone to spot the mistakes as it were, give it a good poke and see what needs to be added or taken away.

For an idea of what it's about, the prompt I chose was -

Prompt : Surrogate Danny gets accidentally inseminated with Steve's sperm even though Steve specifically asked for a female surrogate. By the time they realize about the mix up, Danny is already pregnant. Throw in meddling friends and family too.


- so, any takers? It's about 20,000 words, Danny/Steve with some NC17 scenes towards the end.